My name is Daniel, I’m a single child and I’m 14 years old. Now I’m in nine grade junior high school and I lived with my grandfather at the edge of Jakarta city, Bojongkenyot yeah because my parent had died when I was 3 years old. I didn’t have any friends because, they think i freak. I like to delusional and read comics. I can spend my time in bedroom just for reading comics, because of that, I’m too lazy to study, and tomorrow is the worst day for me I think, because tomorrow is announcement of graduation, I’m scary if all that bad score is in diploma because when the night of examination I entered all of text book to my desk drawer and exchange it with bantman and doraemon comics, yeah I hope I can graduate. When I was sitting next to the window, suddenly I saw a falling star in paddy area, then spontaneous I asked a demand “ I hope tomorrow all of the news that I accepted is a good news!Amen!” .
Next morning in my class, I with my grandpa sat and waited for my name turn to called, after ten minutes, I heard my name was calling and my grandpa go front to theacher desk.
“ Sit down please, sir” teacher said actually I really surprised when I saw Daniel’s result (while taking Daniel’s envelope and gave it to Daniel’s grandpa).
“Is this true???” asked grandfather to my teacher.
“yeah, Daniel’s score is really nice and one more Daniel got an achievement scholarship enter to the favorite senior high school as the reward because he got high score and placed the second rank in school.
When I hear that, I just agape. And start from that I’m more believe my demand is granted by a star.
short stories today, I entered to my new world senior high school, at morning as usual I went to school by my bike. On the way, I saw a girl with senior high school uniform robbed soon as posible, I chased that thief with my bicycle an I got him and her bag and suddenly my hands was stiff and I couldn’t control my bike, and when I realized I’m already in my bedroom and I saw vague a girl farewell with my grandpa, after that moment, I often felt rigid suddenly. And after the fifth day, I entered to school, I was went to the school corridor and I saw someone who isn’t stranger to me, she looked at me and she gave smile, and now the girl is already in front of me.
“Hey how are you? Got healthy? Yesterday I heard after that moment, you got sick and didn’t enter to school, mmmhh oh yeah thanks for your help yesterday.” The girl said
“emhh, hey, owh you the girl I helped yesterday? Worth it your face not forgein for me. You study in here??? Asked me awkward.
“oh yeah I’m new student here same like you, oh yeah my name is Agnes, I’m ten E grade J”.
“hmmm, Agnes, my name is Daniel I’m ten E grade too, so we are classmate, isn’t it???”
“he’e. heheheh:D”
After fourteen years, Agnes is my first friend I have, she always accompanied me. After that time, Agnes became my best friend, she’s smart and nice girl and after entered to school during two months my condition became worse and at morning when I was waking up, I can stood as well as I did. That day, my grandpa a descision to brought me to doctor, vague I heard from behind the curtain.
“Your grandson had ataksia disease and now that stuff already attacked motion organs.”
I felt shocked :O Ataksia is a disorder of coordination such as clumsy or awkward movements and is not solid, appears in many diseases and conditions.and could made paralyzed for the sufferer even until die.And I heard grandpa’s cried. I walking through day by day with wheel chair, most of my day spend in hospital and I just accompanied by my grandpa and my bestfriend Agnes, I just kept silent when agnes told me all of the stuff that happenend at school today, I’m jealous, I wanna go to school and study, when I knew Agnes, my life is change, I became dilligent in study but I still dilligent to read comics, after 2 hours Agnes accompany and give me some food, she permit to go home. Tonight, the air is so cold and from hospital window I looked into the free space, I saw falling star, and I made a wish, I would tottally healthy tomorrow. But at morning I felt worse, and I couldn’t talked and I hate it. This Afternoon, Agnes came she heard about my condition from my grandpa and she just said” Niel, don’t be sad, I hope you believe in God would heal you later”. And then I never believe about star, or fiction.After that, Agnes cheer me up with her jokes. I walked through day by day with good although in physically my condition became worse. One night, Agnes came with restless face, but not usual she just told some about school and something not important.
At morning, (Agnes cellular was ringing) Agnes saw in her cellular phone ( Grandpa is calling…)
Agnes heard grandpa cried “ Nes ( while sobbing) Daniel had been critical.”
As soon as possible, he disconnected grandpa’s call, and go to hospital.
(At Daniel’s room) Agnes was crying heavily.
“Niel, you couldn’t be die, I want you always be there for me, cause I hope we could be together I love you niel , I love you since we meet at the first time I already trully love you.”
After Agnes finished, in unconscious condition Daniel smile while the tears out, not long after that, Daniel exhale the last breath. At the time Agnes shouted an cried heavily
Mandate
we can believe in miracles but if not based on the prayers of all it's just fiction